Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by skodna, Dec 26, 2015.
For those of you who didn't see it live: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/180538687
so.. i tryed to improve some mistakes from the last video, this time on my own run.
feedback as always appreciated
Thumbnail looks poorly made imo idk what it is if its the font or the green text i personally dont like it that much
It might be the font since imo the intro text also look kinda bland looks like your basic times new roman.
Very minor thing tho. (Before you start going through all the default fonts theres also a lot of custom on sites like https://www.dafont.com/ )
Intro feels very long too try to find songs with shorter intros or intros you can shorten down without it being weird.
Be very careful when increasing fov as in your video you can see through the arm when standing still/knifing which to me is slightly distracting and doesnt look good and you could also see through some walls.
For longer videos try to have less off a pause between the songs there was like a 1-2sec pause between the songs and also try to keep the theme more close to each other (if that makes sense) like the first 2 songs were kinda similar beat/mood and the last one was very aggressive.
Idk how AE is but change the type of fade you used for the song because it all of a sudden got low very fast then slowly got lower kinda threw me off.
no bully pls. bad but trying to getter better
offically rekt with 0.04 secs
Shard will beat this soon so watch it quickly.
@Orbit copyright claim this vid pls
i pretty much own this WR
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